Nature beauty
This poem is about, I heard so many people talk about a beautiful place Guilin, In China. Everyone has been over there. People were admired how nice is it. My friend told about it before also. So I wrote this poem. I wish this poem can bring everyone to over there and what you feel while I am reading this poem.
Nature beauty
By Jacky zhang 02/28/07
No one knows who make this land,
No one knows who kiss children’s body,
No one knows who make children laugh,
No one knows who give birds place to make their nest,
No one knows who look like elephant,
No one knows who give elephant hairs.
Look!
Nature beauty makes this land,
Children is kissed by the water,
Fish bits children’s toes make they laugh,
Trees give birds place to make their nest,
That mountain looks like elephant,
Trees are elephant’s green hairs all over his body.
See!
Who make vaster stop on the side walk,
Mandarin ducks make vaster stop on the side walk.
Who don’t scared people and still eating grass?
Rabbits don’t scared people and still eating grass.
Who sing happy songs and break morning silent,
Birds sing happy songs and break morning silent.
This poem is about, I heard so many people talk about a beautiful place Guilin, In China. Everyone has been over there. People were admired how nice is it. My friend told about it before also. So I wrote this poem. I wish this poem can bring everyone to over there and what you feel while I am reading this poem.
Nature beauty
By Jacky zhang 02/28/07
No one knows who make this land,
No one knows who kiss children’s body,
No one knows who make children laugh,
No one knows who give birds place to make their nest,
No one knows who look like elephant,
No one knows who give elephant hairs.
Look!
Nature beauty makes this land,
Children is kissed by the water,
Fish bits children’s toes make they laugh,
Trees give birds place to make their nest,
That mountain looks like elephant,
Trees are elephant’s green hairs all over his body.
See!
Who make vaster stop on the side walk,
Mandarin ducks make vaster stop on the side walk.
Who don’t scared people and still eating grass?
Rabbits don’t scared people and still eating grass.
Who sing happy songs and break morning silent,
Birds sing happy songs and break morning silent.
Use you hart to see it,
Use you hart to touch it,
Use you hart to smell it,
Use you hart to feel it,
Use you hart to hear it.
Why do we have this land?
Nature beauty makes this land,
I wish everyone can belong to this land.
Every time I see about this land pictures on internet. I feel very proud of my country has this land. It is calling Guilin. I want to live with my family forever.
Use you hart to touch it,
Use you hart to smell it,
Use you hart to feel it,
Use you hart to hear it.
Why do we have this land?
Nature beauty makes this land,
I wish everyone can belong to this land.
Every time I see about this land pictures on internet. I feel very proud of my country has this land. It is calling Guilin. I want to live with my family forever.
5 comments:
Is this place famous in China? It looks great. I can feel the nature in your poem.
It's a good poem.I like your poem"no one knows, use your hart to...and the background(the bird's singing).
I enjoyed it. It’s a good poem with a beautiful picture. You described the land very good. You right, it looks like an elephant. It must be a one of very well known place and famous tourist side in China because the unique shape and a beautiful view. You read it very well, only a little mistake that you read some part of it not in right sequence as in the poem article (Use your hard to see, ….touch,…smell, …feel, …hear). And also I just wondering, I heard the bird singing beside your voice. Did you want to make the bird singing as a background of your poem? If yes It was a good idea but you should consider about your volume because instead of be as a background, I heard sometimes the bird singing was louder then your volume.
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