PET
Itzel Moreno
You can stay here all your life,
Forever on this island.
From here the ocean shines,
Like a big beautiful diamond.
The families are very happy when they arrive
To this beautiful island.
Because in this land,
The air smells like coconuts.
The ocean water foam touches your body,
Making you feel happy all over.
From this island,
It’s marvelous to watch the sunrise.
The wind touches your face,
And you feel like a bird.
The island’s palm trees are dancing,
To the rhythm of the wind.
From the beach you can see
Different kinds of fish.
And the coral reefs are so happy
When the fish touch them
Dolphins doing flips in the ocean
To your delight.
And even the turtles and crabs
Enjoy the day on this island.
The island’s sand is beautiful,
Because it is full of colorful shells.
And the children turn it into art,
With their wonderful sand castles.
The ocean’s breeze keeps you cool
On a hot summer day on this island.
Surfing the ocean’s waves
Keeps you having fun always on this island.
Families are very sad,
When they have to leave.
Packing their bags
And saying goodbye to the sea.
This place is like a dream,
From which you don’t want to awaken.
You can stay here all your life,
Forever on this island.
1 comment:
I enjoyed your poem very much. You described it very details. Is it in Mexico? From your poem, I can imagine what the beautiful land is. No wonder, why you love the island so much. But I think it was a very long poem. it will be nice if you can eliminate some line (unimportant line) and make some repetition word to compose it more attractive.
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